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**Updated** I need your imput on a rough draft I’m working on

Started by benboles · 7 months ago

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Click on it to see a bigger more readable size. Let me know what you think. Any thing I’m missing, got wrong, is it to much, could there be more? ... Continue reading »

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  • Is it meant to be a logo, a poster, etc???


    Only initial comment would be the text at the top almost bleeds off, otherwise very nice.


    Any other comments would be effected by what your intenetions are.

  • looks good, i agree with the bleed issue....
    and maybe the outward text gradient doesn't help it stand out much...maybe more emphasis like drop shadow or ?????
    love the blog....


    james wright
    simonsolutions.com

  • Thanks for the comments. I appreciate your help with this. I will work in the top white wording and also the word Outward. My goal with the gradient in Outward is movement, but maybe that can be achieved another way.

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