DISQUS

FusionLife: **Updated** I need your imput on a rough draft I’m working on

  • Chris Marsden · 2 years ago

    Is it meant to be a logo, a poster, etc???


    Only initial comment would be the text at the top almost bleeds off, otherwise very nice.


    Any other comments would be effected by what your intenetions are.

  • james · 2 years ago

    looks good, i agree with the bleed issue....
    and maybe the outward text gradient doesn't help it stand out much...maybe more emphasis like drop shadow or ?????
    love the blog....


    james wright
    simonsolutions.com

  • Ben · 2 years ago

    Thanks for the comments. I appreciate your help with this. I will work in the top white wording and also the word Outward. My goal with the gradient in Outward is movement, but maybe that can be achieved another way.