FusionLife: **Updated** I need your imput on a rough draft I’m working on
Chris Marsden
· 2 years ago
Is it meant to be a logo, a poster, etc???
Only initial comment would be the text at the top almost bleeds off, otherwise very nice.
Any other comments would be effected by what your intenetions are.
james
· 2 years ago
looks good, i agree with the bleed issue.... and maybe the outward text gradient doesn't help it stand out much...maybe more emphasis like drop shadow or ????? love the blog....
james wright simonsolutions.com
Ben
· 2 years ago
Thanks for the comments. I appreciate your help with this. I will work in the top white wording and also the word Outward. My goal with the gradient in Outward is movement, but maybe that can be achieved another way.
All Comments
Is it meant to be a logo, a poster, etc???
Only initial comment would be the text at the top almost bleeds off, otherwise very nice.
Any other comments would be effected by what your intenetions are.
looks good, i agree with the bleed issue....
and maybe the outward text gradient doesn't help it stand out much...maybe more emphasis like drop shadow or ?????
love the blog....
james wright
simonsolutions.com
Thanks for the comments. I appreciate your help with this. I will work in the top white wording and also the word Outward. My goal with the gradient in Outward is movement, but maybe that can be achieved another way.